Welcome to Butterman Travel, Incorporated a full service agency designed to meet all your exclusive time travel needs. Enter former boy band superstar, Tristan Helms, desperate to retrieve a lost item from his past and willing to pay triple fare for a time-trip to get there, and Bianca has to find a way to complete the job and return home before the government gets wind and shuts down the family biz for good. Scheme to shut down all private time travel agencies. gets stuck with a full audit-part of a government take-over
When a government agent starts nosing around the operation, ButtermanTravel, Inc. “I’d have pegged YOU (addressed to a single individual) for someone who prefers a Southern drawl on HIS (singular) cyber help.”) Like I said, maybe this is considered okay nowadays, but it always catches this old broad’s eyes.Īll-in-all, a great start.Even though eighteen-year-old Bianca Butterman is heir to the family biz, she may never see the day her time-craft license becomes official. It’s the usage of the pronoun “their” instead of a more correct singular pronoun. For all I know, its more frequent usage may be driving it toward being “accepted”, but I’m gonna mention it anyway. Now, this may be a little nit-picky, because it’s something I see more and more frequently these days… in newspapers, magazine, and books… even textbooks, so it may even be considered proper usage now.
However, even as it stands, the voice alone would be sufficient to keep me reading. (Nothing new there.) Hopefully, that information will be clarified within the next page or two.
If I’d read the first book, I’d already have a better understanding of who these two characters are, and if this book picks up right where the other one left off, I might even know where (and when) they happen to be carrying on this conversation, but as it stands, I’m clueless. It comes across as natural and flows well.īut, I don’t feel grounded, if you know what I mean.
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